世界很大,但往往是微小的事物构成这一大千世界;社会很广,但往往是平凡的举动组成这一宽容社会;心灵很博,但往往是不经意的触动激起心湖的涟漪。(首先开头从三个角度提出了中心,但正文未能与之相对应。前后文字脱节,照应不周,结构欠严谨,内容也不紧凑。) The world is very large, but it is often the tiny things that make up this vast world. The society is very wide, but it is often the ordinary actions that make up this tolerant society; the mind is very broad, but often it is inadvertently touched by the embarrassment that stirred up the heart lake. (First of all, the center was proposed from three angles, but the text failed to correspond to it. The texts are out of touch, they are ill-conceived, the structure is not precise, and the content is not compact.)