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中学生作文“文艺腔”病表现为:语言虽华丽但思想苍白。此病不仅害了学生作文的文风,也害了学生做人的人格。“文艺腔”病主要有三个病源:(1)中高考的负面影响。中高考作文命题大都偏于文学感性的路子,而且有意无意地纵容、偏重“文笔”。现有的高考作文判定分数设定了基础等级与发展等级,发展等级则含有四个要素的评判,即深刻、丰富、有文采、有创新。“深刻”“丰富”“有创新”都较难,也不
High school students composition “literary chamber ” disease performance: Although the language gorgeous but pale. The disease not only harms the writing styles of students, but also harms the personality of students. “Literary cavity ” disease has three main causes: (1) the negative impact of the college entrance examination. Most college entrance essay propositions deviate from the sensibility of literature, but also consciously or unconsciously indulge, emphasis on “writing”. The existing college entrance essay decision scores set the basic level and development level, the development level contains four elements of the judge, that is profound, rich, Wen Cai, innovative. “Deep ” “Rich ” “Innovative ” are harder, and not