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试题 假设你是李华。昨天你收到了你的美国笔友James的e-mail，询问你对野生动物保护的看法。请你就以下内容给他回一封邮件。
1. 为什么有些野生动物濒临灭绝？
2. 如何保护野生动物？
注意：
1. 词数：120左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear James,
I am very glad to hear from you. Here are my opinions of the wildlife protection.
________________________________________________________________ .
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
点拨 书信越来越成为高考书面表达中一种高频率的考查形式。电子邮件（e-mail）是建立在计算机网络基础上的一种通信形式，与英文书信的格式差不多。
本话题的核心是野生动物的保护。根据题目要求，我们需要从两个方面说明对这一话题的看法：部分野生动物濒临灭绝的原因；保护野生动物的举措。
因此，文章的篇章结构应该是：
第一段引出话题：野生动物保护；
第二段分析部分野生动物濒临灭绝的原因；
第三段介绍保护野生动物的举措。
习作一
Dear James,
I am very glad to hear from you. Here are my opinions of the wildlife protection.
①With world’s populations increasing sharply, the current sources don’t meet people’s need. ②People’s activities threaten the animals with their habitat. ③As a result, these endangered animals may die out. ④As far as I’m concerned, it’s very important to protect those wildlife from attack. ⑤What we do really matters. ⑥Take pandas for example, not enough food and a loss of bamboo is the pandas’ serious problem. ⑦In order not to make them disappear, we can set up some reserves to create a cosy atmosphere for them. ⑧The fact that too much hunting is another reason to decrease wildlife. ⑨We shouldn’t hunted for wildlife so as to earn money. ⑩Only if we get along well with wildlife can they be well protected！
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
点评 这是一篇中档习作。
在内容上，完成了试题规定的任务，覆盖了所有要点。分析了野生动物濒临灭绝的原因，并从如何保护大熊猫这个角度列举了保护野生动物的举措。
但是内容上有些杂乱。第三段过渡狩猎是导致野生动物濒临灭绝的原因应归于第二段。
在语言上，应用了一些高级的语法结构和词汇，如使用了：meet people’s need，as a result，die out，as far as I’m concerned，take ... for example，so as to等高级短语。句①中使用了with的复合结构。句⑤运用了what引导的名词性从句。句⑧使用了that引导的同位语从句。句⑩使用了only if条件状语从句引导的倒装句。
但是有些表达不地道，还存在中文的影响。如句⑥中Take pandas for example, not enough food and a loss of bamboo is the pandas’ serious problem。可以改为：The reason why the pandas are disappearing is that they don’t have enough food。句⑦中将atmosphere改为environment会更好。句⑧The fact that too much hunting is another reason to decrease wildlife。应该改为：The fact that too much hunting is another reason for the decreasing number of the wildlife。
习作二
Dear James,
I am very glad to hear from you. Here are my opinions of the wildlife protection.
①Many wild animals are facing the danger of extinction because the environment where they are living has changed greatly. ②For example, with the developmet of cities, the using of insecticide and serious pollution, their living areas have become narrower and narrower. ③Many of the wild animals are faced with food crisis. ④At the same time, some have been killed just for their fur or meat. ⑤As we all know, every animal has its place in the balance of nature. ⑥Therefore, the following measures should be taken: pollution standards are made to keep down poisons; killing off certain rare species is forbidden; national parks should be set up as wild life reserves. ⑦Only if we human beings take action immediately can wild animals be protected.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
点评 这是一篇优秀习作。
本篇习作在内容上，完全完成了试题规定的任务，覆盖了所有内容要点。从有些野生动物濒临灭绝的原因和保护野生动物的举措两个方面向James介绍了李华对野生动物保护的看法。
在语言上，正确应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，具备很强的语言运用能力。如：句①中使用了定语从句；短语face the danger of extinction形象地描述了野生动物的生存状态。句②③④⑤是高级的简单句，其中含有一些高级的表达：for example；with介词短语；比较级的使用；be faced with；at the same time和as we all know等。句⑥除了过渡词therefore,还使用了一系列并列的被动句，表达简洁有力。句⑦除了动词短语take action，还使用了only if条件状语从句引导的倒装句。
1. 为什么有些野生动物濒临灭绝？
2. 如何保护野生动物？
注意：
1. 词数：120左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear James,
I am very glad to hear from you. Here are my opinions of the wildlife protection.
________________________________________________________________ .
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
点拨 书信越来越成为高考书面表达中一种高频率的考查形式。电子邮件（e-mail）是建立在计算机网络基础上的一种通信形式，与英文书信的格式差不多。
本话题的核心是野生动物的保护。根据题目要求，我们需要从两个方面说明对这一话题的看法：部分野生动物濒临灭绝的原因；保护野生动物的举措。
因此，文章的篇章结构应该是：
第一段引出话题：野生动物保护；
第二段分析部分野生动物濒临灭绝的原因；
第三段介绍保护野生动物的举措。
习作一
Dear James,
I am very glad to hear from you. Here are my opinions of the wildlife protection.
①With world’s populations increasing sharply, the current sources don’t meet people’s need. ②People’s activities threaten the animals with their habitat. ③As a result, these endangered animals may die out. ④As far as I’m concerned, it’s very important to protect those wildlife from attack. ⑤What we do really matters. ⑥Take pandas for example, not enough food and a loss of bamboo is the pandas’ serious problem. ⑦In order not to make them disappear, we can set up some reserves to create a cosy atmosphere for them. ⑧The fact that too much hunting is another reason to decrease wildlife. ⑨We shouldn’t hunted for wildlife so as to earn money. ⑩Only if we get along well with wildlife can they be well protected！
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
点评 这是一篇中档习作。
在内容上，完成了试题规定的任务，覆盖了所有要点。分析了野生动物濒临灭绝的原因，并从如何保护大熊猫这个角度列举了保护野生动物的举措。
但是内容上有些杂乱。第三段过渡狩猎是导致野生动物濒临灭绝的原因应归于第二段。
在语言上，应用了一些高级的语法结构和词汇，如使用了：meet people’s need，as a result，die out，as far as I’m concerned，take ... for example，so as to等高级短语。句①中使用了with的复合结构。句⑤运用了what引导的名词性从句。句⑧使用了that引导的同位语从句。句⑩使用了only if条件状语从句引导的倒装句。
但是有些表达不地道，还存在中文的影响。如句⑥中Take pandas for example, not enough food and a loss of bamboo is the pandas’ serious problem。可以改为：The reason why the pandas are disappearing is that they don’t have enough food。句⑦中将atmosphere改为environment会更好。句⑧The fact that too much hunting is another reason to decrease wildlife。应该改为：The fact that too much hunting is another reason for the decreasing number of the wildlife。
习作二
Dear James,
I am very glad to hear from you. Here are my opinions of the wildlife protection.
①Many wild animals are facing the danger of extinction because the environment where they are living has changed greatly. ②For example, with the developmet of cities, the using of insecticide and serious pollution, their living areas have become narrower and narrower. ③Many of the wild animals are faced with food crisis. ④At the same time, some have been killed just for their fur or meat. ⑤As we all know, every animal has its place in the balance of nature. ⑥Therefore, the following measures should be taken: pollution standards are made to keep down poisons; killing off certain rare species is forbidden; national parks should be set up as wild life reserves. ⑦Only if we human beings take action immediately can wild animals be protected.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
点评 这是一篇优秀习作。
本篇习作在内容上，完全完成了试题规定的任务，覆盖了所有内容要点。从有些野生动物濒临灭绝的原因和保护野生动物的举措两个方面向James介绍了李华对野生动物保护的看法。
在语言上，正确应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，具备很强的语言运用能力。如：句①中使用了定语从句；短语face the danger of extinction形象地描述了野生动物的生存状态。句②③④⑤是高级的简单句，其中含有一些高级的表达：for example；with介词短语；比较级的使用；be faced with；at the same time和as we all know等。句⑥除了过渡词therefore,还使用了一系列并列的被动句，表达简洁有力。句⑦除了动词短语take action，还使用了only if条件状语从句引导的倒装句。