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【技法导航】如果把一篇好的文章比作夏日里一朵清新芬芳的荷花,那么好的细节描写就如同荷花边滴翠的绿叶,给荷花平添了几分灵气,增添了几分神韵。下面,我们就一起来探讨写作中的细节描写。先请看一个作文片段:瘦枝兀立,与泥土中矗立和钟表伶仃的黑色指针遥相呼应。清早入校,傍晚离开,双脚与指针打着同样的节拍,周而复始,日复一日。一天的开始与结束就在晨光与夕阳的照面里被我细数,也被钟表刻录。
If you compare a good essay to a fresh and fragrant lotus in summer, the good details are like the green leaves of a lotus leaf, adding a bit of Reiki to the lotus flower and adding a bit of charm . Below, we work together to explore the details of the writing description. First look at an essay fragment: Thin branches upright, and stands in the earth and clock black lonely pointer echoes. Early morning school, left in the evening, his feet and the pointer hit the same beat, go back and forth, day after day. The beginning and the end of the day were detailed by me in the morning light and the setting sun, which were also recorded by clocks and watches.