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猴子也过美食狂欢节，你听说过吗？
So many fruits to eat！ But they are for monkeys. This is the Monkey Buffet Festival in Thailand. It is in November every year. People in Bangkok make monkeys go to a temple（寺庙）. Then they give fruits and vegetables to the monkeys. This festival is to thank monkeys， because they bring visitors（游客）to this place.
甜蜜的兵马俑巧克力，你要不要也来一口？
In a hotel in Xi’an， people made these little soldiers（士兵）with chocolates. Terracotta Warriors（兵马俑）are wearing Christmas hats and look cute. There are about 300 Christmas warriors and horses in all. What a delicious Christmas！
他是一位《吉尼斯世界纪录》的狂热粉丝，来看看他的收藏吧！
His name is Martyn Tovey. He is 57 years old. Over 40 years， the British man has collected（收集） 353 Guinness World Records books. He is a super fan and set a world record for the biggest collection. At school age， Tovey got a Guinness book as a prize. He became interested in facts and data（数据）. Now he knows a lot about Guinness world records.
South Korean actor Kim Woo-bin（金宇彬）doesn’t think he is handsome. In his own words， his face looks like a dinosaur（恐龙）. But it doesn’t stop him attracting（吸引）a lot of fans.
He has played many cool young men on screen. They look like a bad boy but have a good heart. Choi Young-do（崔英道） in the 2013 TV series（电视连续剧）The Heirs（《继承者们》）is a good example.
Kim used to think “looking cool” was important for acting. He’d often look in a mirror（镜子）to find the coolest expression.
But one day he read a book called I’m an Actor. In the book， one actor said： “If you’re sincere（真诚的）， the right expression will come out by itself.”
Kim said since then， he has stopped looking at himself in a mirror. “Instead I try to find the best emotion（情感）for the situation.”he said.
习作原文
My favorite book is Today I’m the Flag Raiser. In the story， the lead character is a clever boy called Xiaoxiao. He is a primary school student. He wants to be a school flag raiser. You think this is so easy， but in fact， it’s not easy. When he can?achieve his dream， teacher?tells him， the other?student will be the flag raiser. He is so sad， but he doesn’t lose confidence. In the last week of primary school， he raised the national flag. This story told me never to give up on your dreams. You must work hard achieving?it.
修改稿
My favorite book is Today I’m the Flag Raiser. In the story， the lead character is a clever boy called Xiaoxiao. He is a primary school student. He wants to be a school flag raiser. You think this is so easy， but in fact， it’s not easy. When he is about to achieve his dream， the teacher tells him another student will be the flag raiser. He is so sad， but he doesn’t lose confidence. In the last week of primary school， he raised the national flag. This story told me never to give up on your dreams. You must work hard to achieve it.
作文点拨
本文讲述了作者最喜爱的一本书的主要内容，并从书中得出了“永远不要放弃梦想”这一主题。文章叙述得有条有理，结构安排恰当，是一篇很好的记叙文。但个别词语的用法需要注意：
?can表示“能够”，是百分之百可以做到的，而从下文可知，主人公没有做到，所以此处应用is about to，表示“即将”。
?teacher在此是特指，所以前面需要加定冠词。
?the other表示两者中的另一个，即总共只有两个人；another指“另一个”，即很多人中的另一个。
?行为动词后接动词时，通常用动词不定式，此处用to achieve表示目的。
So many fruits to eat！ But they are for monkeys. This is the Monkey Buffet Festival in Thailand. It is in November every year. People in Bangkok make monkeys go to a temple（寺庙）. Then they give fruits and vegetables to the monkeys. This festival is to thank monkeys， because they bring visitors（游客）to this place.
甜蜜的兵马俑巧克力，你要不要也来一口？
In a hotel in Xi’an， people made these little soldiers（士兵）with chocolates. Terracotta Warriors（兵马俑）are wearing Christmas hats and look cute. There are about 300 Christmas warriors and horses in all. What a delicious Christmas！
他是一位《吉尼斯世界纪录》的狂热粉丝，来看看他的收藏吧！
His name is Martyn Tovey. He is 57 years old. Over 40 years， the British man has collected（收集） 353 Guinness World Records books. He is a super fan and set a world record for the biggest collection. At school age， Tovey got a Guinness book as a prize. He became interested in facts and data（数据）. Now he knows a lot about Guinness world records.
South Korean actor Kim Woo-bin（金宇彬）doesn’t think he is handsome. In his own words， his face looks like a dinosaur（恐龙）. But it doesn’t stop him attracting（吸引）a lot of fans.
He has played many cool young men on screen. They look like a bad boy but have a good heart. Choi Young-do（崔英道） in the 2013 TV series（电视连续剧）The Heirs（《继承者们》）is a good example.
Kim used to think “looking cool” was important for acting. He’d often look in a mirror（镜子）to find the coolest expression.
But one day he read a book called I’m an Actor. In the book， one actor said： “If you’re sincere（真诚的）， the right expression will come out by itself.”
Kim said since then， he has stopped looking at himself in a mirror. “Instead I try to find the best emotion（情感）for the situation.”he said.
习作原文
My favorite book is Today I’m the Flag Raiser. In the story， the lead character is a clever boy called Xiaoxiao. He is a primary school student. He wants to be a school flag raiser. You think this is so easy， but in fact， it’s not easy. When he can?achieve his dream， teacher?tells him， the other?student will be the flag raiser. He is so sad， but he doesn’t lose confidence. In the last week of primary school， he raised the national flag. This story told me never to give up on your dreams. You must work hard achieving?it.
修改稿
My favorite book is Today I’m the Flag Raiser. In the story， the lead character is a clever boy called Xiaoxiao. He is a primary school student. He wants to be a school flag raiser. You think this is so easy， but in fact， it’s not easy. When he is about to achieve his dream， the teacher tells him another student will be the flag raiser. He is so sad， but he doesn’t lose confidence. In the last week of primary school， he raised the national flag. This story told me never to give up on your dreams. You must work hard to achieve it.
作文点拨
本文讲述了作者最喜爱的一本书的主要内容，并从书中得出了“永远不要放弃梦想”这一主题。文章叙述得有条有理，结构安排恰当，是一篇很好的记叙文。但个别词语的用法需要注意：
?can表示“能够”，是百分之百可以做到的，而从下文可知，主人公没有做到，所以此处应用is about to，表示“即将”。
?teacher在此是特指，所以前面需要加定冠词。
?the other表示两者中的另一个，即总共只有两个人；another指“另一个”，即很多人中的另一个。
?行为动词后接动词时，通常用动词不定式，此处用to achieve表示目的。