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笔者对高一新生的语文学习情况作了一个简单的调查,了解到好几位自认为写作水平较高的学生在中考作文中却马失前蹄。这是什么原因呢?几位同学给了我一个最简单的解释:写偏题了。为什么会写偏题呢?让我们一起来分析一下2010年无锡市中考作文“难忘的决定”:生活中,许多时候,许多事情需要我们作出决定:一次赈灾活动,是否慷慨解囊;一次同学误会,是否有勇气说出消除隔阂的话语:别人遇到了生活的挫折,是否发出鼓舞对方勇敢面对的短信;自己面临新的机会,是否能够为自己“悍然”
The author made a simple survey of the freshman’s language learning situation and learned that several students who considered themselves as having a high level of writing failed to make any marks in the senior high school entrance examination essay. What is the reason? A few students gave me one of the most simple explanation: to write some questions. Why do we write some questions? Let us together to analyze the Wuxi 2010 senior high school entrance examination composition “unforgettable decision ”: life, many times, many things need us to make a decision: a disaster relief activities, whether generously; a classmate misunderstood , Whether or not they have the courage to say discard barriers: people encounter the frustration of life, whether to send out a message to encourage each other to bravely face; face new opportunities for themselves, whether “flagrant”