激情是写作的命根子 ,传统的作文教学忽略了对学生写作情趣的激发 ,单一的作文批改方式在这方面表现得尤为突出 ,教师批阅的评语 ,好的 ,学生读它不仅是一种享受 ,还能产生再次写作的欲望。然而 ,教师坐在办公室里写评语的单一批阅形式 ,即便是教师辛辛苦苦写的评语 ,日久必生 Passion is the lifeblood of writing. The traditional composition teaching ignores the stimulation of students’ writing taste. The way of a single composition correction is particularly prominent in this respect. The comments reviewed by teachers are good, and it is not only an enjoyment that students read it. Can also produce the desire to write again. However, when teachers sit in the office and write a single review of the comments, even the hard-written comments of the teachers