微点评:小作者抓住了每一项游戏最好玩的地方,这就是抓住了特点所在。哇!森林里有好多动物呀!看,恐龙,我瞄准它,砰的一声,耶!击中了,恐龙摇起了尾巴。那还有一头野猪呢,妈妈打中了它,野猪立刻哼哼了起来。最后我们经过了一个可怕的黑乎乎的山洞,蝙蝠那刺耳的叫声在山洞里回荡。要不是妈妈在身边,我都快吓哭了。“森林狩猎”真刺激。弹跳机是很挑战人的胆量的。那个像飞碟一样的大家伙,长着十多个手臂,我 Micro comments: small writers caught every game the most fun place, which is to seize the characteristics of where. Wow, there’s a lot of animals in the forest, look, dinosaurs, I aim at it, bang, yeah, hit, the dinosaur shook his tail. Then there is a wild boar it, mom hit it, wild boar immediately hummed. In the end we passed a dreadful dark cave where the harsh cry of a bat echoed in the cave. If not my mother is around, I almost scared to cry. “Forest Hunting ” really exciting. Bouncer is very challenging human courage. That big guy like UFO, with more than a dozen arms, me