有些喜爱写作的学生往往在作文中堆砌词藻,以为只要追求文辞华美就能写出好文章来。其实,这是一种误解。为了教育学生,我让他们把《荷塘月色》和《背影》两篇课文的语言作一比较。大家的感受是:用浓笔重彩绘出的荷塘美景令人心驰神往,而用朴素平实的语 Some students who love writing tend to pile up words and phrases in their essays, thinking that they can write good articles as long as they are pursuing beautiful language. actually it is a kind of misunderstand. In order to educate the students, I asked them to compare the language of the texts of “The Moon in the Lotus Pond” and “Back View.” The feeling of everyone is that the beauty of lotus ponds painted with thick pens is fascinating and simple.