(作文题不够新颖,不引人注目可以改为“溜旱冰之初体验”。)每个人都经历过很多第一次,却有很多都已经淡忘了。其中印象最深刻的是第一次滑旱冰。(画线部分可用比喻的修辞来写作,这样更形象生动。)暑假里的一天,妈妈带我到游乐场玩。在溜冰场地,看到别人踩着旱冰鞋在人群中滑来滑去,我顿时着了迷,也缠着妈妈带我去学滑旱冰。租好滑冰鞋和护具,我就冲进了旱冰场。(语言比较平淡,精彩度不够。) (Essay question is not enough novel, not noticeable can be “rollerblading beginning experience ”) Everyone experienced a lot of the first time, but many have forgotten. The most impressive of these are the first roller skating. (Drawing lines can be written in metaphorical rhetoric, which is more vivid.) One day during the summer vacation, my mother took me to the playground. In the ice skating rink, I saw people skating along the roller skates sliding in the crowd, I suddenly lost, but also wrapped her mother took me to learn roller skating. Renting skates and protective gear, I rushed into the skating rink. (The language is rather dull, not good enough.)