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今年本市高中、中专招生的作文试题,要求考生以《见到了儿时的朋友》为题写一篇五百字左右的记叙文,并要有适当的抒情和议论。这道作文题应该说是出得比较好的。它体现了教学大纲对初中毕业生的要求,让考生有内容可写,同时在内容范围和表现手法上作了一定的限制,避免了猜题、押题的可能性。因此,这道题目是能够考出学生真实的作文水平的。从我们随意抽取的上海市崇明县的六百二十五份考生的作文来看,虽然绝大多数作文能够终篇,个人平均分数也比去年略有提高,但是高分的作文却为少见。学生作文主要失分在哪里呢?请看我们对六百二十五份作文按评分标准分项登记的成绩表:
This year’s essay examination questions for the high school and secondary school students in this city require candidates to write a narrative text of about 500 words with the words “See my childhood friend”, and to have appropriate lyrics and arguments. This composition question should be said to be better. It embodies the requirements of the syllabus for junior high school graduates. It allows candidates to have content to write. At the same time, it limits the scope of content and performance techniques to avoid the possibility of guessing and arguing. Therefore, this topic is able to test the students’ true composition level. According to the composition of 625 candidates from Chongming County in Shanghai, we can see that although most of the compositions can be finalized, the average personal score is slightly higher than last year, but the composition with high scores is rare. Where are the major points of student writing? Look at our score table for the 625 entries that were scored by the scoring criteria: