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还是个把月以前,我在某小学看了一些学生的作文,在四年级的作文中,我读到同一个学生的同类题目的两篇作文,一篇是学期开始时写的,一篇是学期结束时写的。现将原文一字不易地抄录如下: 我的爷爷(期初写) 我的爷爷已经70多岁了,他很爱劳动。一次,我爷爷在大街上扫地把土扫到果皮箱里。我很爱他,他常常给小朋友们讲故事,街道上平给。他一个奖壮,他很高兴。我的爸爸(期末写) 第一段:爸爸教我算术题,他讲的很细直。第二段:我在学较里我得了五分老师夸奖我。第三段:我放学回家爸爸问我算术得了几分。这天我在家做作业,我老是愁眉苦脸的
A month ago, I read some students' compositions in a primary school. In the fourth grade of composition, I read two essays of the same class with the same student, one was written at the beginning of the semester and the other was Written at the end of the semester. Now the original hard to copy as follows: My grandfather (beginning of the writing) My grandfather has more than 70 years old, he loves labor. Once, my grandpa swept the floor sweep the dirt to the garbage bin. I love him very much. He often teaches stories to children and gives peace on the streets. He was a winner and he was very happy. My dad (last term) The first paragraph: Dad taught me math problems, he spoke very fine straight. The second paragraph: I learned more than I had five teachers praised me. The third paragraph: I came home from school Dad asked me a bit arithmetic. This day I am homework, I always frown