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【摘要】高考英语写作评分标准“最高档”要求中有这样两条：1.丰富、多样化的语言表达。2.为尽量使用较复杂结构或高级词汇所致的些许错误可以原谅。要达到这样的要求，就要从平时在句子学习方面做积累，并有意识地进行训练。
【关键词】书面表达 靓句子
一、写完整正确的句子
写出好句子的先决条件是能够写出正确的句子。那先来测测你对英语的基本句子结构的掌握吧，这几句是正确的句子吗？如果你认为有误，该怎么改呢？
1.The meeting will until 3： 00.
2.Work hard， you will succeed.
3.I have a brother， who is a doctor.
解答： 1.The meeting will last until 3： 00.
2.Work hard， and you will succeed.
3.本句中who is a doctor是brother的定语。
简单句：只包含一个主谓结构的句子。
并列句：主谓结构 主谓结构 （或更多主谓结构…）
复合句：主谓结构 主谓结构 （或更多主谓结构…）
从句做句子的某一（些）成分
简单句是基础中的基础，所以好的简单句是背诵的首选，句子感觉增强了，长难句自然也就攻克了！
二、让自己的句子“靓”起来
1.收集和练习使用简洁明快、语言地道的句式和表达方法。
比较下面对同一意思的两种表达
· Suddenly I thought out a good idea.
A good idea occurred to me. /A good idea suddenly struck me.
· I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.
Your letter of August 15th reached/got to me this morning.
从这几个句子，你是否发现：英语重客观描写，而中文重主观感受，所以不要小看中英文语言的比较。
2.注意句式的变化，同一意思用疑问、感叹、祈使、强调、省略等句式表达，语气、重点、效果就不同。
比较下面对同一意思的两种表述
· When he spoke， he felt more and more excited.
The more he spoke， the more excited he felt.
· The bell is ringing now.
There goes the bell！
· We all know the earth is covered by water.
As is known to all， the earth is covered by water.
也许你脑子里第一出现的都是普通的句子，那就养成习惯经常问自己是不是还能用别的（新的/更好的）句式来表达同一个意思？
3. 搭配使用各种句子，如长短句结合，各种语法结构（比如分词或从句），简单句、并列句与复合句共用。其实高考要求的文章也就一百多字，有三个复杂的长句就足够了。
简洁有力的短句：When I grow up， I want to have seven kids.
Yes， seven.
严密周到的长句：Experts said that in developing countries ongoing urbanization （城市化）—large numbers of people moving from the countryside into cities—has made the problem worse.
两个实用的办法：扩展句子或者缩写句子；可以先从缩写句子练起， 一次可以省略或者删除句子的几个词，但剩下的部分应该在语法上成立：
如：As this year’s high school graduates are settling into college dorms， an increasing number of students， like Erin and Michael， are choosing to take a gap year before college.
·As this year’s high school graduates are settling into college dorms， an increasing number of students are choosing to take a gap year before college.
·As this year’s high school graduates are settling into college dorms， students are choosing to take a gap year before college.
·As graduates are settling into college dorms， students are choosing to take a gap year before college.
·As graduates are settling， students are choosing to take a gap year before college.
·Students are choosing to take a gap year before college.
·Students are choosing to take a gap year.
·Students are choosing.
扩展句子刚好相反；这样的练习也可以和同学一起做，可以巩固对句子结构的概念，也利于培养长短句的转换能力，直至最后能够写出含量大、结构准确的长句。
4.使用高级词汇，也能让普通的句子增色不少。
比较下面对同一意思的两种表述
· This dictionary gives us a great help.
This dictionary is of great help.
· As a result the plan was a failure.
The plan turned out （to be） a failure
不要光做高考题型，其实句型转换、根据文章意思填词汇都是很好的练习。从阅读中你都可以发现大量的高级词汇、精彩句式和表达，不要忘了睁大眼睛、定期收集！
【关键词】书面表达 靓句子
一、写完整正确的句子
写出好句子的先决条件是能够写出正确的句子。那先来测测你对英语的基本句子结构的掌握吧，这几句是正确的句子吗？如果你认为有误，该怎么改呢？
1.The meeting will until 3： 00.
2.Work hard， you will succeed.
3.I have a brother， who is a doctor.
解答： 1.The meeting will last until 3： 00.
2.Work hard， and you will succeed.
3.本句中who is a doctor是brother的定语。
简单句：只包含一个主谓结构的句子。
并列句：主谓结构 主谓结构 （或更多主谓结构…）
复合句：主谓结构 主谓结构 （或更多主谓结构…）
从句做句子的某一（些）成分
简单句是基础中的基础，所以好的简单句是背诵的首选，句子感觉增强了，长难句自然也就攻克了！
二、让自己的句子“靓”起来
1.收集和练习使用简洁明快、语言地道的句式和表达方法。
比较下面对同一意思的两种表达
· Suddenly I thought out a good idea.
A good idea occurred to me. /A good idea suddenly struck me.
· I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.
Your letter of August 15th reached/got to me this morning.
从这几个句子，你是否发现：英语重客观描写，而中文重主观感受，所以不要小看中英文语言的比较。
2.注意句式的变化，同一意思用疑问、感叹、祈使、强调、省略等句式表达，语气、重点、效果就不同。
比较下面对同一意思的两种表述
· When he spoke， he felt more and more excited.
The more he spoke， the more excited he felt.
· The bell is ringing now.
There goes the bell！
· We all know the earth is covered by water.
As is known to all， the earth is covered by water.
也许你脑子里第一出现的都是普通的句子，那就养成习惯经常问自己是不是还能用别的（新的/更好的）句式来表达同一个意思？
3. 搭配使用各种句子，如长短句结合，各种语法结构（比如分词或从句），简单句、并列句与复合句共用。其实高考要求的文章也就一百多字，有三个复杂的长句就足够了。
简洁有力的短句：When I grow up， I want to have seven kids.
Yes， seven.
严密周到的长句：Experts said that in developing countries ongoing urbanization （城市化）—large numbers of people moving from the countryside into cities—has made the problem worse.
两个实用的办法：扩展句子或者缩写句子；可以先从缩写句子练起， 一次可以省略或者删除句子的几个词，但剩下的部分应该在语法上成立：
如：As this year’s high school graduates are settling into college dorms， an increasing number of students， like Erin and Michael， are choosing to take a gap year before college.
·As this year’s high school graduates are settling into college dorms， an increasing number of students are choosing to take a gap year before college.
·As this year’s high school graduates are settling into college dorms， students are choosing to take a gap year before college.
·As graduates are settling into college dorms， students are choosing to take a gap year before college.
·As graduates are settling， students are choosing to take a gap year before college.
·Students are choosing to take a gap year before college.
·Students are choosing to take a gap year.
·Students are choosing.
扩展句子刚好相反；这样的练习也可以和同学一起做，可以巩固对句子结构的概念，也利于培养长短句的转换能力，直至最后能够写出含量大、结构准确的长句。
4.使用高级词汇，也能让普通的句子增色不少。
比较下面对同一意思的两种表述
· This dictionary gives us a great help.
This dictionary is of great help.
· As a result the plan was a failure.
The plan turned out （to be） a failure
不要光做高考题型，其实句型转换、根据文章意思填词汇都是很好的练习。从阅读中你都可以发现大量的高级词汇、精彩句式和表达，不要忘了睁大眼睛、定期收集！