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本文所评改的两篇公文,均为公文著作中的例文,是笔者讲授公文评改实训课时精选的实例。一份事故调查报告,综合性较强,很能说明问题;一份事故结案批复,虽然病误少些,却具有一定的代表性。希望通过评改两文,对读者如何把握公文语言矫正技巧有所帮助。【例文1】对一份事故调查报告的评改【原文】(加圆圈数字序号是为了分析方便)温州建设集团宁蒗项目部施工驻地“7.4”事故的调查报告2009年7月4日19:20分左右,云南富盛
The two official documents reviewed in this article are all examples in the official documentary writings, and are the examples selected by the author for lecturing on the official documents. An accident investigation report, comprehensive and strong, it can explain the problem; an incident settled the case, although fewer mistakes, but it has a certain representation. Hope that by revising the two texts, the reader how to grasp the official document language correction skills helpful. [Article 1] A Review of an Accident Investigation Report [Original text] (The circled number sequence is for ease of analysis.) Investigation Report on the “7.4” Incident of the Construction Project of Ninglang Project Department of Wenzhou Construction Group. July 4, 2009 19 : 20 minutes or so, Yunnan Fusheng