编者推荐：升格前作文,作者思维已发散,但未能聚合；升格后作文,作者思维发散后聚合,井依旨再发散。先表现在题目上,“诗仙”较之“李白”给文章主旨定位鲜明。其后表现在行文上,开篇用“他心里充盈着月光做成的救世情怀；然而,他又不能泯灭自己的个性俯首为奴”,引出主体内容；篇末用“以他独特的仙风道骨亲近苍生,傲视权贵”,强化“诗仙”的蕴含。 Editor’s recommendation: Before the promotion, the author’s thinking has diverged but failed to converge; after the promotion, the author radiates his thoughts and then he converges. First expressed on the subject, “Poetry Immortals” compared to “Li Bai” to the article’s clear positioning of the subject. Later, it was written in a written form. The opening chapter used “He filled his heart with the salvation of the moonlight; however, he could not annihilate his character and bowed to a slave”, eliciting the subject; the end of the text used “with his unique fairy wind The bones are close to the common people, and they are proud of their power. They strengthen the implication of the poetries.