短文写作高分攻略

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  一、审题,定要点
  首先,要明确文章的体裁,是议论文、记叙文、说明文,还是应用文。再决定使用的人称和时态。例如,日记用过去时;说明文、议论文用一般现在时。2010年湖北卷的短文写作是读文写文的新文体,要求举一例子来说明微笑的功能,那么这个例子是自己经历过的,所以用过去时。再如2009年湖北卷要求回一封电子邮件说明两个成语的用法,“‘无所不为’应使用‘无所事事’”应使用一般现在时。而2008年湖北卷,买了一部手机,由于质量问题要求更换,主要用一般过去时,在表达自己的要点时则应穿插一般现在时:Therefore, I require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month.
  
  二、加强句与句之间的衔接词,掌握基本体裁结构以及段落的常用语句
  表示平行、对等或选择关系:and,both ... and,as well as,neither ... nor,either ... or,not only ... but also
  表示转折关系:but,yet,however,nevertheless,in spite of,although,otherwise,while
  表示对比关系:on the contrary,instead of,on the other hand,just like,unlike,in contrast
  表示因果关系:so,for,therefore,as a result,because,owing to,due to,thanks to,on account of,because of
  表示递进、强调:furthermore,what’s more,in addition,moreover,worse still, above all, certainly important of all,to make matters worse
  表示解释说明关系:namely,actually,such as,for example,for instance,that is to say,in other words, and so on,to tell you the truth,according to this
  表示结论:in short,in brief,in a word,in general,as you know,as far as I know,on the whole
  
  三、增加文章亮点
  除了使用连接词使得行文结构分明,文意贯通,而且还要尽可能采用较高级词汇和短语。例如:
  (1)I think/believe ... (一般)
  In my opinion/view,personally speaking,as far as I know, as far as I’m concerned(较好)
  (2)There are three methods. (一般)
  There are three solutions/approaches to this problem. (较好)
  (3)New China was founded in 1949. (一般)
  1949 saw the founding of new China. (较好)
  另外还要会用从句,恰当地运用倒装句、强调句和非谓语动词是提高写作档次最高效的办法。例如:
  (1)Yao Ming is a great Chinese basketball player,he is helping the Houston Rockets in the NBA and he has a great skill. (简单句)
  Yao Ming, who is a great Chinese basketball player and has a great skill,is helping the Houston Rockets in the NBA. (定语从句)
  (2)After he had finished his homework, he went out to have a rest. (状语从句)
  Having finished his homework,he went out to have a rest. (分词作状语)
  (3)I picked up the book in the shop at the corner.
  It was in the shop at the corner that I picked up the book. (强调句型)
  (4)When he stayed indoors, the door was closed.
  He stayed indoors with the doors closed. (with 的复合结构)
  (5)Only then did they realize hey had made a serious mistake. (倒装句)
  
  四、高度重视书写
  书写好不一定得高分,但高分者的书写一定美观。书写美观和书写糟糕者至少有3~4分的差距,这是影响英语写作得分的非智力因素中最重要的一点。因此,平时练习时同学们就应该加强书写,给高考作文增加得分点,做到万无一失。
  
  Tips:
  议论文常用句式
  点明主题:
   Recently our class has had a heated discussion about whether ...
   People have adopted different attitudes towards ...
   People take different views on this question ...
  表示赞成与反对:
   Some of my classmates approve of/are in favor of/agree with/are for/hold the view that/stand for the view that ...
   The rest of my classmates are against that ... /oppose/object to/hold the opposite view that ...
  一般文体常用句式
   Every coin has two sides.
   The results are as follows:
   When it comes to ...
   There is no doubt that ...
   There is no denying that ...
   From the graph/chart above ...
   A recent survey shows that ...
   According to the survey/figures/data/statistics ...
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