报道亮点:过程描写具体哈皮审核:报道真实有趣,画面感强,而且开头直奔主题,让人一目了然。其中,做葡萄酒的过程报道得详细、具体,步骤虽多,但有条不紊、井然有序,充分体现了作者的虚心好学和善于观察。听说钟于养生的主编大叔已经提早下班去买葡萄了,看来是受到了王峙婷同学的启发。还别说,这篇报道可谓是 Highlights: The process of describing the specific Ha Pei audit: reports really interesting, strong sense of the picture, but also went straight to the topic, people at a glance. Among them, the process of making wine reported in detail, specific, although the steps are numerous, but methodical and orderly, fully embodies the author’s open-mindedness and good observation. I heard that in the health of editor-in-chief uncle had to work early to buy grapes, it seems that was inspired by Wang Shuting students. Do not say that this story is true