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Write a passage of 100～120 words on the topic “How to find happiness”. Use the following points as a guide.
(1) What’s your point of view on happiness?
(2) Do you agree with the saying “Money is happiness”? Give two reasons.
(3) How do we students find happiness in our study and life?
【One Possible Version】
In my opinion, happiness is the feeling people have when they get things they want. I don’t think money is happiness. Rich people might be stressed out all the time because of their tiring jobs, while people who live a simple life are usually happy since they’re easy to be satisfied. Sometimes, money makes people selfish and greedy, which leads to an unhappy life. We students should try to find schoolwork interesting, so we’ll have fun learning. In the meantime, we should also learn to help others and make good friends. Being a nice and kind person will lead us to happiness in both our study and life.
【Comments】
This essay is well written. Firstly, it is well structured; secondly, the author goes right to the point without any distractions. But if the author could have more ideas concerning the students’ learning part, the essay would be more beautiful.
(杭州外国语学校陆玉仙供稿)
(1) What’s your point of view on happiness?
(2) Do you agree with the saying “Money is happiness”? Give two reasons.
(3) How do we students find happiness in our study and life?
【One Possible Version】
In my opinion, happiness is the feeling people have when they get things they want. I don’t think money is happiness. Rich people might be stressed out all the time because of their tiring jobs, while people who live a simple life are usually happy since they’re easy to be satisfied. Sometimes, money makes people selfish and greedy, which leads to an unhappy life. We students should try to find schoolwork interesting, so we’ll have fun learning. In the meantime, we should also learn to help others and make good friends. Being a nice and kind person will lead us to happiness in both our study and life.
【Comments】
This essay is well written. Firstly, it is well structured; secondly, the author goes right to the point without any distractions. But if the author could have more ideas concerning the students’ learning part, the essay would be more beautiful.
(杭州外国语学校陆玉仙供稿)