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假设你叫李华，是湖北某中学高一学生。为了使同学们尽快适应高中英语学习，学校准备举办一次讲座，请根据下面的内容写一份英语海报介绍相关信息，鼓励同学们积极参加。
1. 对象：高一全体学生；
2. 地点：学术报告厅；
3. 时间：2011年9月28日，星期天下午；
4. 讲座者：学校外教Mr Smith。
注意：
1. 可适当增加细节，以使内容连贯；
2. 词数100左右；
3. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名；
4. 文章开头已给出，不记入总词数。
Poster
To help the students, especially Senior 1 students, to learn Senior English more effectively,
【习作1】
To help the students, especially Senior I students, to learn Senior English more effectively, our school have decided to hold lecture about how to learn English in senior years. The lecture will be held on the afternoon of 28th September, 2011, last about two hours. It will be given in the lecture hall by Mr Smith, our foreign teacher, whom most of us may already have known. He is experienced at teaching foreign students to learn English. It hopes that his speech will be help to all of us. As it happens to be a Sunday, I advise that all of us spare some time to attend it, which will benefit us a lot in our English study.
【点评】
1. 话题特点
本篇写作话题是根据所给汉语提纲写一篇海报。本篇写作素材具有下面这些特点：
①话题与中学生的学习或日常生活相关，体现英语学科的特点；
②“简约”的汉语提示要求考生必须适当增加细节，才能达到字数的要求；
③本篇应用文已给出开头，要求考生根据所给提示逐条表述。此时要注意有条理地展开叙述，做到“有话慢慢说(要点齐全)，有话好好说(表达准确，语言地道，用词优美)”。
2. 高分炼就靠文采
①It will be given in the lecture hall by Mr Smith, our foreign teacher, whom most of us may already have known. 這个讲座将在学术报告厅举办，主讲人是我们的外教Smith先生。我们大多数人可能已经知道他。本句使用了一般将来时的被动语态(will be given)，同位语(our foreign teacher)，以及whom引导的定语从句，对信息的把握和拓展适度。
②She is experienced at teaching foreign students to learn English. 她在教外国学生学英语方面很有经验。
这是个单句，句中使用了短语be experienced at和动词不定式作宾语，信息的表达完整。书面表达要求我们“使用复杂结构或高级词汇”。所谓“复杂结构”，并非一定要用各种从句，一个短小精辟的句子也可以起到画龙点睛的作用。书面表达的写作讲究一张一弛，不宜一味强调写长句，应该“长枪短炮两相宜”，既要有好的句式结构，也要注意简约之美。
③As it happens to be a Sunday, I advise that all of us spare some time to attend it, which will benefit us a lot in our English study. 因为讲座恰好是一个星期天，因此希望大家都能抽时间来听一听，这对我们的英语学习有好处。
本句使用了as引导的原因状语从句，advise后面宾语从句使用了虚拟语气以及which引导的非限制性定语从句。
3. 七彩不足臻完善
①our school have decided to hold lecture about how to learn English in Senior years. 本句主语是第三人称单数，谓语应该用单数形式；单数名词lecture在这里表示“一个讲座”，应该加不定冠词。“单数名词是秃子，出门别忘戴帽子”。
②It hopes that his speech will be help to all of us. 本句的错误很明显，那就是主句部分应该用“it be+过去分词+that+主语从句”结构；另外，表示“对某人有帮助”应该是be of help to sb. 或be helpful to sb.。
【习作2】
To help the students, especially Senior 1 students, to learn Senior English more effectively, the Student Union will hold a lecture. The lecture will be about how we should learn English as Senior students. It will be happened in the afternoon of September 28th, at the lecture hall. Our foreign teacher Mr Smith will tell us how to learn English in an effective way. It will be Sunday, everybody will be free, so all of you can come and listen to it, can’t you? Mr Smith is good at teaching English, and his lecture will of course be very helpful to us. We all look forward to hearing it. When you listen to it, please take notes carefully.
【点评】
相对前面一篇习作，本篇在用词、表达等方面就略逊一筹了。从文章的叙述看，本文使用了比较丰富的语法和词汇知识，比如并列句、反义疑问句等，但在叙述中出现了一些语法错误，细节方面显得比较拖沓。
1. 可圈可點的亮丽
①The lecture will be about how we should learn English as Senior students. 这个讲座是关于作为高中生，我们该如何学好英语的。本句使用了一般将来时介绍讲座的内容，how引导的宾语从句表达准确、自然。
②Mr Smith is good at teaching English, and his lecture will of course be very helpful to us. 史密斯先生很擅长英语教学，他的讲座无疑会对我们很有帮助。本句使用了并列句，两个句子的时态变化自如。
2. 需要改正的瑕疵
①It will be happened in the afternoon of September 28th, at the lecture hall. 本句动词happen不应该用被动语态，正确的表达应该是：It will take place/be held/ happen ...
②It will be Sunday, everybody will be free, so all of you can come and listen to it, can’t you? 这个句子比较长，涵盖了较多的信息，但是句子结构比较松散，叙述显得没有生气。可以这样进行改造：As it happens to be Sunday, when everybody will be free, we hope/it is desired/it is suggested that you should manage to spare some time and attend it.
【范文】
To help the students, especially Senior 1 students to learn Senior English more effectively, our school has arranged a special lecture meant for students of Senior 1. The lecture, given by Mr Smith, our foreign teacher from England, will give us some practical tips on how to learn English effectively. The lecture will be held in the afternoon on September 28th, 2011. We do hope that all the students will attend it. For one thing, Mr Smith is an experienced expert at English teaching. What’s more, as it happens to be Sunday, we can all spare the time to attend it, which you’ll find useful to your English study.
Do come and enjoy the lecture, everybody.
1. 对象：高一全体学生；
2. 地点：学术报告厅；
3. 时间：2011年9月28日，星期天下午；
4. 讲座者：学校外教Mr Smith。
注意：
1. 可适当增加细节，以使内容连贯；
2. 词数100左右；
3. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名；
4. 文章开头已给出，不记入总词数。
Poster
To help the students, especially Senior 1 students, to learn Senior English more effectively,
【习作1】
To help the students, especially Senior I students, to learn Senior English more effectively, our school have decided to hold lecture about how to learn English in senior years. The lecture will be held on the afternoon of 28th September, 2011, last about two hours. It will be given in the lecture hall by Mr Smith, our foreign teacher, whom most of us may already have known. He is experienced at teaching foreign students to learn English. It hopes that his speech will be help to all of us. As it happens to be a Sunday, I advise that all of us spare some time to attend it, which will benefit us a lot in our English study.
【点评】
1. 话题特点
本篇写作话题是根据所给汉语提纲写一篇海报。本篇写作素材具有下面这些特点：
①话题与中学生的学习或日常生活相关，体现英语学科的特点；
②“简约”的汉语提示要求考生必须适当增加细节，才能达到字数的要求；
③本篇应用文已给出开头，要求考生根据所给提示逐条表述。此时要注意有条理地展开叙述，做到“有话慢慢说(要点齐全)，有话好好说(表达准确，语言地道，用词优美)”。
2. 高分炼就靠文采
①It will be given in the lecture hall by Mr Smith, our foreign teacher, whom most of us may already have known. 這个讲座将在学术报告厅举办，主讲人是我们的外教Smith先生。我们大多数人可能已经知道他。本句使用了一般将来时的被动语态(will be given)，同位语(our foreign teacher)，以及whom引导的定语从句，对信息的把握和拓展适度。
②She is experienced at teaching foreign students to learn English. 她在教外国学生学英语方面很有经验。
这是个单句，句中使用了短语be experienced at和动词不定式作宾语，信息的表达完整。书面表达要求我们“使用复杂结构或高级词汇”。所谓“复杂结构”，并非一定要用各种从句，一个短小精辟的句子也可以起到画龙点睛的作用。书面表达的写作讲究一张一弛，不宜一味强调写长句，应该“长枪短炮两相宜”，既要有好的句式结构，也要注意简约之美。
③As it happens to be a Sunday, I advise that all of us spare some time to attend it, which will benefit us a lot in our English study. 因为讲座恰好是一个星期天，因此希望大家都能抽时间来听一听，这对我们的英语学习有好处。
本句使用了as引导的原因状语从句，advise后面宾语从句使用了虚拟语气以及which引导的非限制性定语从句。
3. 七彩不足臻完善
①our school have decided to hold lecture about how to learn English in Senior years. 本句主语是第三人称单数，谓语应该用单数形式；单数名词lecture在这里表示“一个讲座”，应该加不定冠词。“单数名词是秃子，出门别忘戴帽子”。
②It hopes that his speech will be help to all of us. 本句的错误很明显，那就是主句部分应该用“it be+过去分词+that+主语从句”结构；另外，表示“对某人有帮助”应该是be of help to sb. 或be helpful to sb.。
【习作2】
To help the students, especially Senior 1 students, to learn Senior English more effectively, the Student Union will hold a lecture. The lecture will be about how we should learn English as Senior students. It will be happened in the afternoon of September 28th, at the lecture hall. Our foreign teacher Mr Smith will tell us how to learn English in an effective way. It will be Sunday, everybody will be free, so all of you can come and listen to it, can’t you? Mr Smith is good at teaching English, and his lecture will of course be very helpful to us. We all look forward to hearing it. When you listen to it, please take notes carefully.
【点评】
相对前面一篇习作，本篇在用词、表达等方面就略逊一筹了。从文章的叙述看，本文使用了比较丰富的语法和词汇知识，比如并列句、反义疑问句等，但在叙述中出现了一些语法错误，细节方面显得比较拖沓。
1. 可圈可點的亮丽
①The lecture will be about how we should learn English as Senior students. 这个讲座是关于作为高中生，我们该如何学好英语的。本句使用了一般将来时介绍讲座的内容，how引导的宾语从句表达准确、自然。
②Mr Smith is good at teaching English, and his lecture will of course be very helpful to us. 史密斯先生很擅长英语教学，他的讲座无疑会对我们很有帮助。本句使用了并列句，两个句子的时态变化自如。
2. 需要改正的瑕疵
①It will be happened in the afternoon of September 28th, at the lecture hall. 本句动词happen不应该用被动语态，正确的表达应该是：It will take place/be held/ happen ...
②It will be Sunday, everybody will be free, so all of you can come and listen to it, can’t you? 这个句子比较长，涵盖了较多的信息，但是句子结构比较松散，叙述显得没有生气。可以这样进行改造：As it happens to be Sunday, when everybody will be free, we hope/it is desired/it is suggested that you should manage to spare some time and attend it.
【范文】
To help the students, especially Senior 1 students to learn Senior English more effectively, our school has arranged a special lecture meant for students of Senior 1. The lecture, given by Mr Smith, our foreign teacher from England, will give us some practical tips on how to learn English effectively. The lecture will be held in the afternoon on September 28th, 2011. We do hope that all the students will attend it. For one thing, Mr Smith is an experienced expert at English teaching. What’s more, as it happens to be Sunday, we can all spare the time to attend it, which you’ll find useful to your English study.
Do come and enjoy the lecture, everybody.