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假如你叫李华,你的英国笔友Mike在上次来信中谈到中国的“富二代”这个话题。请你用英文给Mike回信,中国“富二代”的情况作个简单介绍,并谈谈自己的想法。回信要点如下:
1. “富二代”不良的生活、学习习惯及不良的行为表现:不愿吃苦耐老,不愿读书学习,吃、穿用品讲名牌;有点迷恋上网,有的甚至集体吸毒, 有人甚至飙车致人死亡。
2. 你的想法:“富二代”要培养自己良好的生活学习习惯,家长、社会应加强对“富二代”的教育和引导。
注意:1. 字数为100字左右;
2. 参考词汇 “富二代” the second rich generation 飙车 drag racing;
3. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好(不计入你所写的词)。
Dear Mike,
How are things going? In your last letter you talked about “the second rich generation” in China. Now I’d like to tell you something about them in brief.
I’m really glad to communicate with you about this topic.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Mike,
How are things going? In your last letter you talked about “the second rich generation” in China. Now I’d like to tell you something about them in brief.
Born into a family of wealth, they are not willing to study and can’t bear hardships. Instead, they pay more attention to their clothing, food and something else which is cool. What’s worse, some of them are addicted to surfing the net day and night and some even take drugs together. In fact, we sometimes read the news that “the second rich generation”, in order to “play more cool”, hold the activity of “drag racing”, resulting in death. “The second rich generation” has a negative meaning in our country now.
In my view, no pains, no gains. They shouldn’t take their parents’ wealth for granted. No matter how rich their families are, developing good studying and living habits so that they can realize their dream is what they should do. At the same time, parents, schools and the society also should play an important role in educating them.
I’m really glad to communicate with you about this topic.
Yours,
LiHua
【点评】
文章开头用过去分词作状语:born into a family,紧接着用了几个高级词组:pay attention to, be attached to, be addicted to, result in, take sth. for granted, realize one’s dream, at the same time, play in important role等,在第三段中用到了让步状语从句,如:no matter how ...,并用到了一句谚语:no pains, no gains。文章用词丰富,语言地道,表达流畅。另外,信中包含了所有提示要点,条理清晰,脉络分明,说服力强。从各方面来说,这篇文章都堪称佳作。
(指导教师:朱章丹)
1. “富二代”不良的生活、学习习惯及不良的行为表现:不愿吃苦耐老,不愿读书学习,吃、穿用品讲名牌;有点迷恋上网,有的甚至集体吸毒, 有人甚至飙车致人死亡。
2. 你的想法:“富二代”要培养自己良好的生活学习习惯,家长、社会应加强对“富二代”的教育和引导。
注意:1. 字数为100字左右;
2. 参考词汇 “富二代” the second rich generation 飙车 drag racing;
3. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好(不计入你所写的词)。
Dear Mike,
How are things going? In your last letter you talked about “the second rich generation” in China. Now I’d like to tell you something about them in brief.
I’m really glad to communicate with you about this topic.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Mike,
How are things going? In your last letter you talked about “the second rich generation” in China. Now I’d like to tell you something about them in brief.
Born into a family of wealth, they are not willing to study and can’t bear hardships. Instead, they pay more attention to their clothing, food and something else which is cool. What’s worse, some of them are addicted to surfing the net day and night and some even take drugs together. In fact, we sometimes read the news that “the second rich generation”, in order to “play more cool”, hold the activity of “drag racing”, resulting in death. “The second rich generation” has a negative meaning in our country now.
In my view, no pains, no gains. They shouldn’t take their parents’ wealth for granted. No matter how rich their families are, developing good studying and living habits so that they can realize their dream is what they should do. At the same time, parents, schools and the society also should play an important role in educating them.
I’m really glad to communicate with you about this topic.
Yours,
LiHua
【点评】
文章开头用过去分词作状语:born into a family,紧接着用了几个高级词组:pay attention to, be attached to, be addicted to, result in, take sth. for granted, realize one’s dream, at the same time, play in important role等,在第三段中用到了让步状语从句,如:no matter how ...,并用到了一句谚语:no pains, no gains。文章用词丰富,语言地道,表达流畅。另外,信中包含了所有提示要点,条理清晰,脉络分明,说服力强。从各方面来说,这篇文章都堪称佳作。
(指导教师:朱章丹)