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古人说:“玉越琢越美,文越改越精。”就是说,好文章都是经过切磋琢磨、反复修改的。初学写作者,可能不了解这个道理,有的铺纸挥笔,脱稿之后,就心满意足,既不改、又不看。这样搞,不但难以提高写作水平,而且是很不严肃的。文章怎么修改呢?就以《背水之战》(载—九八二年十一月六日《北京日报》)的修改为例,粗略地谈谈自己的体会。一九八二年,我采访了高级工程师、北京市劳动模范杨嗣信同志。他在参加首都建设的三十个春秋中,提合理化建议和技术革新三十多项。被选为党的十二大代
The ancients said: “Yu Yue Zhuo Yue Mei, the more refined the more refined.” That is to say, good articles are pondering, repeatedly revised. Beginner writers may not understand this truth, and some of the shop paper brush, after the submission, to contentment, neither change nor look. In this way, it is not only difficult to raise the standard of writing, but also it is not serious. How can we revise the article? Take the revision of the “Battle of the Backwater” (Beijing Daily, November 6, 1982) as an example, and briefly talk about his own experience. In 1982, I interviewed senior engineer Comrade Yang Sisin, a model worker in Beijing. During his 30 years of participation in the capital construction, he put forward more than 30 suggestions on physical and chemical and technological innovations. Was chosen as the party’s 12th generation