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特色评奖:优秀构思奖获奖者:梁王莹获奖原因:文章以《神曲》中三部曲的形式模拟了地狱中死神与人、人间里“我”与母亲、天堂中上帝与小神的对话,从几个角度反映了地球环境日益恶化、污染严重等令人担忧的状况,然后通过上帝与人类的对话展示人类对于环境问题的反思,预示了地球美好的明天。整篇文章在形式、语言,尤其是构思方面,向我们展示了作者自己独特的魅力。虽然文章最后人类的醒悟写得稍有些生硬,但并不影响该文获得初二组的一等奖。
Feature Award: Excellent Conceiving Prize Winner: Liang Wangying Awards Reason: The article simulates the dialogue between God and man in hell and God and God in heaven and God in the form of a trilogy in Divine Comedy. Several angles reflect the worrying situation of the worsening of the earth’s environment and serious pollution. Then through the dialogue between God and mankind, humanity’s reflections on environmental issues are displayed, heralding a beautiful tomorrow. The entire article shows us the unique charm of the author in terms of form, language, and especially concept. Although the article’s final human awakening was a bit blunt, it did not affect the article’s first prize in the first two groups.