阅读本刊2013年第6期操德胜老师《作文求真路在何方——从一篇“重写”习作谈开去》一文,深感小学生习作难,写真习作更难,让老师满意的真习作难上加难。可是,就操德胜老师举出的王尚文老师博客里的小朋友写的习作而言,王老师及作者的点评是不是有点拔高之嫌呢?我也不妨从这篇“重写”的习作谈一点自己的想法。这位小朋友的习作字数不多,不妨再录一遍:“这个星期 Read article No. 6, 2013 Cao De Sheng teacher ”seeking truth from where the road - from a “ rewrite ”to talk about to go,“ a text, I feel more difficult for primary school students, pictorial more difficult to let the teacher Satisfied with the real hard to do. However, as far as the exercises written by Mr. Wang Shangwen from the teacher’s blog written by Mr. De-Sheng Wang are concerned, what is the opinion of Mr. Wang and the author? Learn to talk about your own ideas. The children’s writing few words, may wish to re-recorded: ”This week