浙教版语文第十一册中,有一篇写景的文章———《庐山云雾》,自1995年以来,笔者多次在公开课教学中执教该课,并且在尝试中思索,在思索中孕育“改造”。现以该课第5自然段教学为例,作以阐述与说明。一、《庐山云雾》第5自然段教材及分析《庐山云雾》第5自然段内容是这样的:庐山 Zhejiao version of the language of the eleventh book, there is a scenery of the article --- “Lushan cloud”, since 1995, the author repeatedly taught in public courses in the class, and try to think, conceived in thinking “Transformation.” Take the course of the fifth paragraph of the class as an example, to elaborate and explain. First, “Lushan cloud” section fifth textbook and analysis “Lushan cloud” section 5 of the natural content is this: Lushan