我读《高三女生》的心情,就像早春时节观赏桔子洲头杨柳枝头吐露的黄茸茸的嫩黄柳絮那样开心,确让我感觉到一片温馨清新的气息……开卷第一篇《无火狱练》,从质文到标题,颇有新的创意,也只有势如五更晨光的当今学子写得出来,也只有具有上进心灵的少年,才能如此绘神绘色再现校园种种紧张而有序的生活画面。作者擅长以无邪的天真口语叙事,既准确状物传神,又能流利地描写时空中的生活。那种种仿佛“上紧了发条的”忙碌情景,以及回家时让父母感到像是“刚从战场上回来的伤员似的”夸张,把一个“累”字表现得活灵活现。但它不是无为无奈的怨言,却是些深明非经“无火狱炼”而上不了“天堂”的少年心态的反映。写得可爱,令人感奋, I was in the mood of “High School Girl” and it was just as happy as watching the yellow and velvety yellow catkins on the willow branch of Orange Island in early spring. It really made me feel a warm and fresh atmosphere.... “Lian”, from the text to the title, is quite new and creative. Only the current students who are in a darker mood can write it out. Only the teenagers who are advancing in the heart can draw the tension and orderly reproduction of the campus. Life picture. The writer is good at narrative innocence naive, both accurate and vivid, but also fluently describes the time and space of life. The kinds of busy scenes that seem to be “winding up and winding” and the parents’ feelings of “extremely wounded” who have just returned from the battlefield when returning home made a “tired” character appear vivid. However, it is not a complaint of inaction and helplessness. It is a reflection of the mentality of young people who are not “Heaven.” Written cute and exciting