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近四年的高考小作文中除’96考说明文写作外,其余三次均考查记叙文的写作,并且都突出强调要求考生“合理的想象”,从考试的实践看,许多考生还是在“合理的想象”这一点上吃了大亏。例如1997年的小作文要求写一个“背同学上学的情景”,有的同学设想出的环境,雷声轰鸣,大雨滂沱,小新背着小牧一步三晃,浑身摔得污泥满身。不但不能体现出小新的高尚思想品质,反而给人以假、空的感受。为了进一步说明“想象要合理”这一点,下面再举一例:下面是一篇短文《发生在我身边的事》的开头和结尾。请根据此作合理的想象,补写中间一段,字数不超过260个。注意:补写部分要与开头、结尾的内容和人物相吻合
In addition to the ’96 exam expository writing, the other four college entrance exam compositions have examined the writing of narrative texts for the remaining three times, and all have emphasized that they require “reasonable imagination”. From the examination practice, many candidates are still “reasonably imagining”. “This was a big loss. For example, a small composition in 1997 called for a ”send back classmates to school scene“, some students envisioned the environment, thunder and thunder, heavy rain, Xiaoxin carrying a small animal husbandry, three steps, shattered body covered with mud. Not only does it fail to reflect the noble qualities of Xiaoxin, it gives people false and empty feelings. To further illustrate the idea that ”Imagination should be reasonable“, here is another example: The following is the beginning and end of an essay ”What happened to me". Please use this as a reasonable imagination to make up the middle section with no more than 260 words. Note: The write-up section should be consistent with the beginning and end of the content and characters