得分亮点:思维大气,意蕴深刻台湾著名女作家刘继荣的女儿说:“我不想成为英雄,我只想成为坐在路边鼓掌的人。”可是,为别人喝彩固然重要,亲自参与人生努力奔跑才是一种圆满。(针对他人观点,直接反向提出观点,迅速入题,干脆利落)倘若人人都在路边鼓掌,那么这条光荣的荆棘路上将有谁奔跑,将由谁来开辟一条新道,将由谁来为后来人树一个航标,开创一片全然不同的天地?(反问句引起下文)社会像一个大舞台,站在其上表演的人有之,而站在台下鼓掌的人占了多数。人们为他人的精彩鼓掌,分享他人的成功来体会 Scoring highlights: thinking atmosphere, profound implication Taiwanese famous woman writer Liu Jirong daughter said: “I do not want to be a hero, I just want to be sitting on the sidelines applause.” However, applause for others is important, personally involved in life efforts Running is a complete success. (For others’ opinions, put forward points directly and promptly and immediately and neatly.) If everyone applauded on the roadside, who would run a new path on this glorious thornbolt? For later a tree beacon, to create a completely different world? (Rhetorical question caused later) Society is like a big stage, standing on the performance of its people, while standing on stage applause accounted for the majority. People applaud the wonderful applause of others and share the successes of others