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[名师画板]文章的框架,好比人的骨骼(ge),血肉则成为文章的精髓。细读本文,文章的结构浑然一体,但读到第三、四、五自然段时,总觉得有点干瘪瘦弱的感觉。这就是被忽略的细节,写好这些内容,才会增添文章的亮点。所以,我们要关注被忽略的,其实不是多余的,而是文章亮点的呈现。[习作原色]香港,我向往已久的乐园文★史曼霖每当看到紫荆花图案,我就想起被称为“魅力之都”的香港,那是我向往已久的地方。听妈妈说,①那里汇集了全世界的
[Famous drawing board] the framework of the article, such as human skeletons (ge), flesh and blood become the essence of the article. Read this article, the structure of the article seamless, but read the third, four, five natural segments, always feel a little dry and thin feeling. This is the neglected details, write these contents, will add highlights of the article. Therefore, we should pay attention to be ignored, in fact, not superfluous, but the article highlights the presentation. [Original] Hong Kong, my long-awaited paradise text ★ Shi Manlin Every time I see the Bauhinia pattern, I think of what is known as the “charm of the capital” of Hong Kong, it is my long-awaited place. Listen to my mom, ① There is a world where you are brought together