得分亮点:角度独特,个性思考我只愿放下步子,在一方静好无常的土地上,带着金砂般渺小而闪光的品质,为世界的前行慷慨解囊。——引子风无偿助力,鹰得以搏击长空;土慷慨汇实,花得以风繁绝艳;星默然成径,银河得以广邈非常……(排比铺陈,引出下文,既有文学色彩,也扩张了文章内涵)这世上总有这么两种角色:一方 Scoring highlights: a unique perspective, personality thinking I just want to put down the pace, on one side of the static and volatile land, with a small gold-sand-like flash quality for the world’s generosity. - Indirect wind gratuitous help, the eagle can fight the sky; earth generously solidified, the flowers can be complicated with the wind; stars silent path, the Milky Way is very wide ... ... (Pai Bi Chan, leads to the following, both literary, but also expansion The article content) There are always such two roles in the world: one